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Yo thabangmphahlele! Waddup - let's take a look at 'keep on going 2'! We liked the idea behind the track, keep workin' on your narrative rapping! You've used explicit language in a restrained way, which is dope. Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little! Practice writin' unique lyrics that will make your music really stand out! Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through! Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars! Putting a little more energy into how you deliver your lyrics would bring out more of your track's strength! Nicely done, you can feel the positivity coming from this track! Thanks again for sharing, it was dope listening to your music! Share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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