Hlompho Lebina

3 years ago

ok I'll

Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi young_loss! Welcome to our feedback of 'Hlompho Lebina- I'm_Freestyle_'! Nice meaning behind the track, it's dope! The beat is dope, nice choice. Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit? Your voice sounds a bit fuzzy, could you try recordin' closer to the mic? Work on developing original bars to help your tracks shine through! Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics! The recordin' quality is a little low, make sure you're using earphones or a headset of some sort if you're not already. Some more natural charisma put into your delivery would help get your message across to a wider audience! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Hlompho Lebina

3 years ago

New