Jake

3 years ago

Tnx

Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo blackwwolf! Waddup - let's take a look at 'girl'! We liked the idea behind the track, keep workin' on your narrative rapping! Cool balance between explicit and clean language, it brings out the best in your lyricism. Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix! Try workin' on the bars to get a fresh lyrical sound! Try workin' on rhymes to get a unique, new sound! Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics! A little more passion in your delivery would really help get your story across! This is a seriously dope track, love the good feelings!! We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Jake

3 years ago

Yeah yeah I'm sure you can find a good place to stay for a while and see if you can find something to do with your life and how you can enjoy your life with the most beautiful place in the world to know that you are going to be good Babe plz give me a chance I can prove I am the best no one can compare me with other