Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo jonnybliss! Waddup - let's take a look at 'take 1'! We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. We like the rhyming, it's tight! Your vocals are a little unclear, maybe try recordin' closer to the mic? Unfortunately the recordin' hasn't come out too well, perhaps you could try recordin' in a quieter place. Dope idea, we enjoyed the storyline of the track! Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. It's awesome that you put so much energy into your delivery, that's what makes a track great!! Thanks again for sharing, it was dope listening to your music! Share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Jonny Bliss

3 years ago

freestyle.. True Spit 206 Music