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b**** ass n**** talk s*** if I don't see nobody else turn against me but everybody else want to be with me when all the way up I can't believe that s*** that will happen to me man hundred percent that your n***** f*** with me that your mother f***** the whole entire family s*** though I told her don't want to be f****** beef around with Savage
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b**** ass n**** talk s*** if I don't see nobody else turn against me but everybody else want to be with me when all the way up I can't believe that s*** that will happen to me man hundred percent that your n***** f*** with me that your mother f***** the whole entire family s*** though I told her don't want to be f****** beef around with Savage
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Hey swsocoolwest! Thanks for sharing 'all' with us! We liked the idea behind the track, keep workin' on your narrative rapping! Your vocals are a bit loud compared to the beat, put 'em down just a little for a perfect mix! Practice writin' unique lyrics that will make your music really stand out! Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics! The recordin' quality is quite low, it would be great to clean it up, perhaps by being in a quieter place to record. Good choice of beat! Submit more for instant feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥