Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi jamesdavis.2538! Welcome to our instant feedback of 'freestyle'! We liked the idea behind the track, keep workin' on your narrative rapping! The recordin' is solid, everything is clear. Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little! Try workin' on the bars to get a fresh lyrical sound! Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound! Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way! Some more natural charisma put into your delivery would help get your message across to a wider audience! Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

James Davis

3 years ago

dry