Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi illey3576! Welcome to our instant feedback of 'my endz '! We like the rhyming, it's tight! Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit? Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics! Unfortunately the recordin' hasn't come out too well, perhaps you could try recordin' in a quieter place. Some more natural charisma put into your delivery would help get your message across to a wider audience! Dope idea, we enjoyed the storyline of the track! Submit more music for instant feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Mc illski

3 years ago

freestyle