Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey joefadhil! Thanks for sharing 'i write' with us! Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together. Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little! The recordin' quality is a little low, make sure you're using earphones or a headset of some sort if you're not already. We like the rhyming, it's tight! Nice flow here - delivery is so important. Submit more music for instant feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Joe Fadhil

3 years ago

i wish i knew i wish i saw i wish i heard bt now am gone with every passing day i was turning to a zombie like a puppet u controlled me with ur mind games made you a princess bt u were making me a buttler with every word was falling deeper was busy building an empiror with a demon mtaachana tu came along,i never listened my boyz tried to warn me never headed i thought it was love wat a blander you only pulled me out to drop me harder So now i write to ease my chest The pain is real,thats no lie now i fall am a gonner Aint got the will and guts to start it over, CHORUS i dint know who to blame i dont know who to curse now my heart is in flames and thats no game