Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey chrisbarker.531! Thanks for sharing 'subzero' with us! The rhyming is nice, well put together! Your vocals are a little high, could you put 'em down a little bit? The recordin' quality is a little low, make sure you're using earphones or a headset of some sort if you're not already. Awesome narrative, keep up the amazing storytelling!! This is a seriously dope track, love the good feelings!! Submit more for instant feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

chris Barker

3 years ago

my soul in a Fernice on fire . Make Me Wanna hop in the Hellcat and burn tires and you know I'm straight out the slums yeah b**** I go dumb like playing chicken with the mack truck and and always just been one screw loose from the screw up and I grew up a screw up in and out of the penitentiary since I was 18 sick and tired of these Hating Ass police trying to incarcerate me but the greatest understanding is we all meet the same fate and no lie right now I'm higher than outer space in the spaceship with Marvin the Martian and I ain't coming down why cuz I like it in the sky and the only time I'm coming down is Geronimo off my high and high hor yeah I'm on my high horse no I won't put the p**** on a pedestal I put the wrapping up on a pedestal like I was Lil Wayne or Eminem just trying to let my soul bleed in these lyrics and they thought I was so dumb but i made an art out of catching crumbs like a pigeon if the pigeon is in the coop let him fly away and when it's safe they going to fly back and I was trying to learn how to fly again broke my wings I had to learn how to fly again when I die give me bulletproof Wings cuz when I'm fly they want to shoot me but it's okay send your b**** over like Red Rover then I tell her to play Red Light Green Light on the way to my crib then I've bend her over and send her back home cuz I ain't got no feelings heart cold heart. So cold it wouldn't unthaw if I heated it on the stove the game need reset like the game stuck on froze and I got that ice Sub-Zero just called the play like get over here I don't give a f*** if the Feds Watching is it they watching they better pay attention cuz I got a hundred more service I bet I get them all off and I don't ever really need a shoulder to lean on but of a ear to listen so kick back get a 2 L of Sprite mix it with some lean and throw these Beats on I want one with some pain in it