Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo derekcavanagh! Waddup - let's take a look at 'one mistake'! Your vocals are the perfect volume, nicely done! Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way! We like the rhyming and lyrics, they're put together real well. With some adjustments, we think this track could be popular! Submit more for instant feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Derek Cavanagh

3 years ago

my boy takes a one way trip