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ruff draft demo (Astronomical Man) my change please let me know what you think feed back thanks

ruff draft demo (Astronomical  Man) my change please let me know what you think feed back thanks

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26 Mar 2021

little boy lost tryn to find myself go for broke nothing else smoke the competition no other proposition once I got you in the sights of my composition and out for everyone to listen they will say I'm bad for your health breath it in once again you can catch it like a toilet number 2 to the paper released for my cranium chamber it will hit you like smoke from the second hand they crammed in side my mind like small can boy amill what thrill more then just a frost more then just ice or a tiny chill boy its chilli don't spoil it foil it aluminum bat to your dom with every word I spit into the faces of every critic not a minute wasted here we go flow like a zippo spewed on to the floor they will eat up every merbelous words like hungry hungry hippo and even though when I'm grown and as an old man getting up out of my bed just ask your girlfriend I will still rise to the occasion I'm just sayn once I was a little lost boy but with a little mental persuasion I launched myself straight into space like it was my birthday in my favorite suit like I was study law of physics and grind landed in your girlfriend's face a flying ace now you all got scarce like you took to much blow blood running out your nose from this axe to your o hold up wait that was a low blow blow the waste and if I did get shoot out in to space you would never lay me to waste no matter where I land I would never waste a minute nor would hesitate open up a mars candy bar like a solider I'd roover on in an astro van with fat knots find a land plot like damn I I guess I am an astronomical man still I will never fall defying the laws of gravity the closes you will ever get to my mental capacity is if I skipped a dentist vist and developed a cavity me from what I see with out everybod e is still mic to me and without the m for me you are all just mice to me I think I found the answer no where near my mind state I will eradicate those who infest the mic like a cancer like you just failed an exam for your prostate and for the ones that dont discriminate and not generate hate get ready for the win as we climb out on a limb and start repositioning BiG SLim thanks again for Listening

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3 years ago

little boy lost tryn to find myself go for broke nothing else smoke the competition no other proposition once I got you in the sights of my composition and out for everyone to listen they will say I'm bad for your health breath it in once again you can catch it like a toilet number 2 to the paper released for my cranium chamber it will hit you like smoke from the second hand they crammed in side my mind like small can boy amill what thrill more then just a frost more then just ice or a tiny chill boy its chilli don't spoil it foil it aluminum bat to your dom with every word I spit into the faces of every critic not a minute wasted here we go flow like a zippo spewed on to the floor they will eat up every merbelous words like hungry hungry hippo and even though when I'm grown and as an old man getting up out of my bed just ask your girlfriend I will still rise to the occasion I'm just sayn once I was a little lost boy but with a little mental persuasion I launched myself straight into space like it was my birthday in my favorite suit like I was study law of physics and grind landed in your girlfriend's face a flying ace now you all got scarce like you took to much blow blood running out your nose from this axe to your o hold up wait that was a low blow blow the waste and if I did get shoot out in to space you would never lay me to waste no matter where I land I would never waste a minute nor would hesitate open up a mars candy bar like a solider I'd roover on in an astro van with fat knots find a land plot like damn I I guess I am an astronomical man still I will never fall defying the laws of gravity the closes you will ever get to my mental capacity is if I skipped a dentist vist and developed a cavity me from what I see with out everybod e is still mic to me and without the m for me you are all just mice to me I think I found the answer no where near my mind state I will eradicate those who infest the mic like a cancer like you just failed an exam for your prostate and for the ones that dont discriminate and not generate hate get ready for the win as we climb out on a limb and start repositioning BiG SLim thanks again for Listening

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