Bluemoon
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Negative Thoughts

Negative Thoughts

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15 Nov 2020

I feel my voice is not heard having thoughts of a nerd something inside of me is even more hard to see I'm facing a bad time this must be a damn sign some maynot understand but the bullets in my hand they say I'm insane got no feelings no pain what's the point of living if your not even fitting I've been dreaming a dream that will never be seen my point is pointless just forget it I'm mindless one day I'll be different atlease that's what my mind thinks gotta ignore all the pain leave them all in a frame is it easy or not some day they'll know my name this life is a heartbreak no life no heart rate that person in me is the person that God made those blessings you see are the blessings that God gave thank God for friends all the journeys that ends thank God for life all the time that i spent thank God for my mama yeah she gave me my strength thank God for traitors mean folks and haters thank God for lovers cold hearts and takers

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Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

2 years ago

Hey @bluemoon.1628, We're gonna review your track 'Negative Thoughts'. Let's get it! Make sure you put headphones in on your next track as the feedback is affecting the recording quality! You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off! We like how the beat sounds with your voice. ๐ŸŽผ The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality. To really enhance this track we suggest making your vocals sound as crisp as possible! Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential! ๐Ÿ‘Œ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐Ÿ˜Ž

2 years ago

Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

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