Its my first attempt at a song (unfinished) and any tips would be great. Man everything fucking sucks now. Can't even go to my school without no one bitchin about. But I can't blame stuff out of my control, but what I'm gonna do is blame it on the dumbasses fucking it up. Yea I'm talking to you Maps Pro fuckers, and im also talking to the rooters and looters making us look like Florida to the rest of the world.