Blue Smith

Writing practice

Blue Smith
Writing practice

55 Plays

19 Aug 2020

let's see the start of the story where do i begin lemme see should i start with Addiction snort coke smoke meth shoot herion anything to numb my depression but will i ever learn my damn lesson see the cops rollin up now I'm stressed again get pressed then searched what you know the lucky mother fucker just found a kilo so go on bet your glad that you busted me so slap the cuffs on my wrist then throw away the key ill do my time won't pay the fee become bffs with new celli damn straight i don't follow the rules cuz fuck the jakes i ain't a goddamn tool this system is broke as fuck the whole goddamn world is so curupt cuz know one really gives a fuck Sad as fuck but thats the truth you can stand in protest but it will be no use you might as well just call a truce the squad rollin up so better yield slow aproach just to test riot shield armored vest because to them your just another pest now your laying on the floor what bloody mess i don't really get the point that your tryna make so just back down for fuck sake before you end up in a body bag name written on your toe tag and you will be gone but not forgotten cuz you never gave up not second thought you had a heart a gold that you chose to share

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4 years ago

Keep up good work Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10

4 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 8/10

4 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10

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