SAW420
SAW420

my rhyme

my rhyme

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08 Jul 2020

sometime creating comes so easy what i creat can come out kinda cheesy but i dont like my lyrics to get sleazy talking about things that are greasy or indorces being greedy i like my lyrice to come hard like they have a Hemi so that messages of piece can reach many rapping about subject that are kinda heavy trying not to rapp to breathy my song are never to lengthy but what is there is not empty wish i would have started this when i was twenty instead im over 40 and a little hefty and sadly quite hairy hopefully my words can help those drowning and pull them to safty like a wherry maybe make a person who is down feal merry or give people hope when moment in life get scary helping people across hard times like a  fairy or helping them avoid fealings of violance like a parry i have only been writing for about 2 year in my spare time since then i been working on my rhyme learning to rapp on time keeping my lyrics free from grime hopefully with timemy skills will climb so i can make music that is sublime helping people free themselfs from the  slime of crime and improving myself at the same time lately ive been trying to put my mind into  overtime so i can get better and bring you rapps that are prime thank you listening to my rhyme and giving your time come back anytime

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4 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10

"wish i would have started early !" feel that

@SAW420 dope style amigo .

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