Thato Mokoena

Mercury Heat

Thato Mokoena
Mercury Heat

17 Plays

30 Apr 2020

I wrote some rhythm that had no beat ever since I made it u had a beef u know I'm always rapping coz I got the beat ,ever since I started u we're always mean ,now I'm getting better now u just had to lean, sit down and relax coz I'm the real deal give me a break u know I'm on fire my beat is so gud it be lighting the night wats my name smoklessmist i bring the heat cause i got the beat, u had a jeep that u couldn't keep bcz u were just a freaky creep Mercury heat is one u never knw Mercury heat is one u never knw the flame is bigger and better than before the flame is bigger and better than before im no joke i bring the spark ur rap life is cold so let me bring the heat

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1 month ago

it's good. audio issues of course. but great job keeping flow. see if you can't get the scheme to match the grade a flow. I like the comedic stuff. but if you look deeper I think there's a way to make those punchlines slap. maybe a different delivery. overall pretty good. 7.5/10

4 years ago

I wrote some rhythm that had no beat ever since I made it u had a beef u know I'm always rapping coz I got the beat ,ever since I started u we're always mean ,now I'm getting better now u just had to lean, sit down and relax coz I'm the real deal give me a break u know I'm on fire my beat is so gud it be lighting the night wats my name smoklessmist i bring the heat cause i got the beat, u had a jeep that u couldn't keep bcz u were just a freaky creep Mercury heat is one u never knw Mercury heat is one u never knw the flame is bigger and better than before the flame is bigger and better than before im no joke i bring the spark ur rap life is cold so let me bring the heat

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