Dwight Schwartz
Dwight Schwartz

dead asleep yet half awake

dead asleep yet half awake

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25 Apr 2020

sometimes we open our eyes and realize that we were dead asleep and half awake giving nothing back from which we take. if only, we could forge a path. find a way back from the aftermath. start anew. begin again. change a life. maybe make a friend. soften a heart. lessen a blow. make someone feel that its not for show. be yourself. living true. doing that thing and doing you. but remember. dont deviate. even in the interest to alleviate. hold your ground. stead fucking fast. tell these motherfuckers you're built to last. you're here to stay. here to live. here to love. here to give. you're here to stay. here to live. here to love. here to give. maybe one day, I'll finish my story. kill all my demons, relish the glory. til then, even I kind of bore me cant really sit and expect they adore me. but I wont do it different. this my trail. every opportunity I will avail. advice to heed. viewpoints to share. all on my journey to be self aware that's all i have to share

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4 years ago

thank you for the kindness. appreciate it greatly

4 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10

4 years ago

powerful message great flow. cool voice. peep this fire #cashcashmoneytho Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10

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