Psycho Tha Don

6 years ago

FYA track FAMILY

Saul Sarmiento

6 years ago

@DRasta thanks man really appreciate that

🖤🎤DRasta🎤🖤 #TrueCritiques

6 years ago

ok so clearly your rhyme scheme is on point, you know how to put bars together you know all the basics & you're straight,, The thing you gotta chase after now is mixing up your rhyme scheme to go aabbaaccbbaa etc get it? then another suggestion is throw some more syllables in the lines to fill them more & speed that flow just a little,, you gonna be solid tho bro,, you hungry & that's mad respectable 💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾