Sample #2

205 Plays

11 May 2019

I'm Comatose, now overdosed from Oxys and I'm laying motionless due to copious. Ferocious this hunger that eats within, and so I up tha dose again. choking on this smoke, intoxicating losing hope in that Everything I've seen The demons slowly dance adrift round me. Frowning in dismay as I see The Demons enjoying the look of me drownin. Foaming from the mouth, vision oh so cloudy. Slow close of eyes and now the Devil slowly bounds me. Shackled in these chains memories fade into a vividly astounding Nightmare. Each lash of the whip, brings fresh tears. Its not the pain one succumbs to that breathes air. but the cynical craftiness of the Devil as he stares.

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5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 7/10

Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 7/10 Impression: 7/10

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 6/10 Impression: 7/10

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