My Sis
Hey Tonya, u remember when we used to play house with building blocks from sun up to sun down we had so much fun we just couldn't stop we'd play with those blocks all around the clock yea those were the good ole days when we would just play we would stay in the house and jus play all day u remember sitting in yo room on the wooden floor we played marbles and jaxx and never kept score we would get carried away and get to loud and make daddy mad and he would yell out! it was all good, wudn no hollerin and hooping me and u both didn't want no whoopin muphet babies,looney tunes and weekends we were best friends even way back then if I ever failed u in any moment of your life everything I did I tried to do right. I love you Tonya from the bottom of my heart your my little Gladiator , I trained u from the start. If you ever need anything, u know it's all good it may be for advice or it may be for a hug Everything I do u know its all love This songs for u Latonya Louis Rudd. Rilla!
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Hey Tonya, u remember when we used to play house with building blocks from sun up to sun down we had so much fun we just couldn't stop we'd play with those blocks all around the clock yea those were the good ole days when we would just play we would stay in the house and jus play all day u remember sitting in yo room on the wooden floor we played marbles and jaxx and never kept score we would get carried away and get to loud and make daddy mad and he would yell out! it was all good, wudn no hollerin and hooping me and u both didn't want no whoopin muphet babies,looney tunes and weekends we were best friends even way back then if I ever failed u in any moment of your life everything I did I tried to do right. I love you Tonya from the bottom of my heart your my little Gladiator , I trained u from the start. If you ever need anything, u know it's all good it may be for advice or it may be for a hug Everything I do u know its all love This songs for u Latonya Louis Rudd. Rilla!
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Hi @bigdawg77d! Welcome to our feedback of 'My Sis'! The lyrics are fire, nicely done! The rhyming is well put together. We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. Good choice of beat! This is super chill, a real nice vibe. Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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