Josh Putnam
Josh Putnam

losing control

losing control

54 Plays

01 Feb 2019

everything is the same unless u play the game or hit fame also claim that's nothing is the same after I aim and miss free falling in the abyss and just became a myth how I wish to kiss the lips and grip them fingertips and go down like battleship between them hips people say I changed but really I'm just drained like a cloud that just rained I straine to retaine the shit I need to explain weather I'm on a plane a fuck train I live my life in vain I need to be restraine before the thing gains control of my membrane it's the demon in my dreams showing scenes of women screaming I understanding the meaning it's about to start creeping and seeking till it's in control and it weeps for a bone it's hard to stay in control when it's in it's zone I sit on it's throne as it goes for the one who moans and hones on the tones on the ones that groans and moans it tears through everything that clones or uses a phone like a cop drone it have that tone that rips and flip's everything including the tips and destroy the lips of these beautiful hips I'm on the road and it's 40 below I see blood in the snow I see a pond and I lean towards it and it shows the monster that lies in my mind and hides till it's gets over pride or in criminal ride and it over takes my mind and it destroys mankind but its confined to my fucked up mind till the day I die then the demon that has lied will be unleashed on anyone who sees it's eyes so it be wise to not be the prize of the demons eyes before it rise and starts to snap ur Bones like fries so go and fucken try but don't cry when I try and pry the life from ur eyes and seek the lies u have kept inside that's what it's likes when it's wondering the nights gets excited at the sighted when the light leaves ur eyes and arise a demon with the same reason it's a completion that stalks the region it's either beaten or eaten to u have no reason or feel uneven that's what fules the demon when u get weaken from were it's been eaten and it escaped to freedom

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5 years ago

I like the way you rhyme your words to the beat, but you should put a little bit more impression into the rap but overall you did good Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10

ok bruh

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