SECTORFIVEONE

4 years ago

Well, I was able to listen to the end, so it's not deplorable. In all honesty, it's choppy. Cadence is everything in Hip Hop. I say work on your delivery and make sure your content ties into a viable theme. It's your first. So tour next one will no doubt be doubly better.

Xoghostlif3

6 years ago

I hope you guys enjoyed this is my first track and I would love to know if you enjoyed or if I could do better.