jones
John Mwangi17 Plays
•3 months ago
Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Your potential is limitless, keep creating! 🌌 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Great 🎉
Now that's what we're talking about @johnmwangi.11493955, Nice job on your first track 'jones'! 1. Become a star on Rap Fame & who knows, maybe you'll be making your own Masterclass one day! 2. Some eye-catching cover art can draw new people to your music! 🎇 3. Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. 🎧 4. Rap Fame defo has some powerful effects 🚀 Keep using 'em, but remember less can be more when it comes to the mixing stage! 5. Use denoise on your vocal to reduce the background noise on your track! 6. Try out the Rhyme Helper to develop your bars & step up your first track! We hope to hear some more from you in the future, we would love to hear how you take our advice on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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