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6 days ago

Work on bringing your voice out and slow your cadence down a little and add some dynamics. You’re fast and monotone. You have obvious potential but you need to add some melody in your flow, bring out your rhymes by adding some quick pauses.. you are just cutting through the track, you have to flow on it. Listen to some method man and some nas, see how they change their cadence up, they will change the rhythm of their words like it’s an instrument. And to bring out what they are saying. Your fast, but it’s not really on beat or flowing with the song, you gotta ride the song not just cut through it with no breathes or changes in tone or pattern.. I couldn’t really follow your rhyme scheme. I didn’t know if you had in-line rhymes as well as end line ones because that was jus like one huge bar

Dani Kash

6 days ago

I came across your profile and i find you quite talented.

Colston Cavins

6 days ago

when i go insane I'm in my lane and I know I'm not da same so I gotta fix my aim then you is so lame so I took the blame then I took a plane and u took da frame so I go insane and I know I'm not da same then I took da hall of fame in my lane pain in my brain chains and gains in my veins moving in a crane in my lane hope I go insane stay the same take the blame man I'm not da same hope I gain and stay in pain with a chain took da hall of fame in my lane pain in my brain hope i stay da same.lookin in for a mouse in a house bout to go insane stuck in my lane on a plane