(Verse 1)
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(Verse 1) Yeah, I'm caught in this emotional storm, Loving you, but it's causing me harm, You were my muse, my star in the night, But your love was a mirage, a fading light. **(Pre-Chorus)** I believed in us, like a gambler’s bet, But you played your cards, and I’m in debt, Promises whispered, now they’re just echoes, I’m letting go, cutting ties, no more shadows. (Chorus) Your love was a maze, a twisted game, I'm breaking free, reclaiming my name, I'll rise from the ashes, like a phoenix, No more tears, no more pain, no more weakness. **(Verse 2)** I wrote you poems, spilled ink on paper, But your indifference cut like a razor, You were the sun, and I was the moon, Chasing your warmth, but it was all too soon. I believed in your lies, your empty words, Now I’m rewriting my story, like a caged bird, I’ll find my rhythm, my own beat, No more waiting, no more defeat. (Pre-Chorus) I believed in us, like a gambler's bet, But you played your cards, and I'm in debt, Promises whispered, now they're just echoes, I'm letting go, cutting ties, no more shadows. **(Chorus)** Your love was a maze, a twisted game, I’m breaking free, reclaiming my name, I’ll rise from the ashes, like a phoenix, No more tears, no more pain, no more weakness. (Bridge) I'll paint my canvas with vibrant hues, Dance to my own rhythm, refuse to lose, You were a chapter, now I'm writing a book, No more chains, no more hooks. **(Chorus)** Your love was a maze, a twisted game, I’m breaking free, reclaiming my name, I’ll rise from the ashes, like a phoenix, No more tears, no more pain, no more weakness. (Outro) So here's my anthem, my redemption song, I'll move forward, where I belong, Your love was a lesson, a bittersweet truth, Now I'm healing, rewriting my youth. Note: This song is a work of fiction and created for entertainment purposes. If you’re going through heartache, remember that healing takes time, and you’re not alone. 🎤❤️
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keep going! not bad at all, little more bars, I'm sure you can get it
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(Verse 1) Yeah, I'm caught in this emotional storm, Loving you, but it's causing me harm, You were my muse, my star in the night, But your love was a mirage, a fading light. **(Pre-Chorus)** I believed in us, like a gambler’s bet, But you played your cards, and I’m in debt, Promises whispered, now they’re just echoes, I’m letting go, cutting ties, no more shadows. (Chorus) Your love was a maze, a twisted game, I'm breaking free, reclaiming my name, I'll rise from the ashes, like a phoenix, No more tears, no more pain, no more weakness. **(Verse 2)** I wrote you poems, spilled ink on paper, But your indifference cut like a razor, You were the sun, and I was the moon, Chasing your warmth, but it was all too soon. I believed in your lies, your empty words, Now I’m rewriting my story, like a caged bird, I’ll find my rhythm, my own beat, No more waiting, no more defeat. (Pre-Chorus) I believed in us, like a gambler's bet, But you played your cards, and I'm in debt, Promises whispered, now they're just echoes, I'm letting go, cutting ties, no more shadows. **(Chorus)** Your love was a maze, a twisted game, I’m breaking free, reclaiming my name, I’ll rise from the ashes, like a phoenix, No more tears, no more pain, no more weakness. (Bridge) I'll paint my canvas with vibrant hues, Dance to my own rhythm, refuse to lose, You were a chapter, now I'm writing a book, No more chains, no more hooks. **(Chorus)** Your love was a maze, a twisted game, I’m breaking free, reclaiming my name, I’ll rise from the ashes, like a phoenix, No more tears, no more pain, no more weakness. (Outro) So here's my anthem, my redemption song, I'll move forward, where I belong, Your love was a lesson, a bittersweet truth, Now I'm healing, rewriting my youth. Note: This song is a work of fiction and created for entertainment purposes. If you’re going through heartache, remember that healing takes time, and you’re not alone. 🎤❤️
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