I'm a newbie in this but a lil bit about my story as its important. I had everything and lost in blink of a eye thru ptsd after death of my mom. Before then I judged others actions but now I've lived it, I understand. Nobody chooses to live at the bottom. I used to write poetry and people advised to write bars as I love my music. Sso I know it's not a full track but it's first draft I'm putting out there for honest feedback weather to continue that route as I do love it. All feedback appreciated. Thanks in advance x