I suck
Jadiel9 Plays
•4 months ago
(Verse 1) Yo, I'm the lyrical architect, buildin' dreams with my bars, From the streets to the stars, yeah, I'm raisin' the par, Got the beat on lock, it's a revolution in sound, Spittin' truth in every line, I’m profound and renowned. Life’s a game of chess, I'm the king on the board, Strategizin’ every move, I ain't gettin' ignored, From the bottom to the top, I've been breakin' the mold, With a mic in my hand, I’m unstoppable gold. (Chorus) We rise, we grind, we hustle every day, Through the highs and the lows, we gon’ find our way, In the city lights, our dreams ignite, This is our moment, our time to shine bright. (Verse 2) Step into my mind, it’s a lyrical maze, Navigatin' through the chaos, in a lyrical blaze, With a vision so clear, I can see through the haze, I’m a poet with the power to amaze and daze. Been through trials and tribulations, but I never gave in, Turned my pain into power, now I’m destined to win, Every scar is a story, every battle a song, Got the heart of a lion, and my spirit is strong. (Chorus) We rise, we grind, we hustle every day, Through the highs and the lows, we gon’ find our way, In the city lights, our dreams ignite, This is our moment, our time to shine bright. (Bridge) Yeah, I’ve seen the dark, but I embraced the light, With the mic in my hand, I’ll continue to fight, For the love of the music, for the thrill of the game, Every verse is a victory, every line is my fame. (Verse 3) From the concrete jungle to the neon skies, I’m a phoenix in the fire, watch me rise and rise, Got the rhythm in my soul, and the beat in my heart, I’m a master of the craft, this is my art. They can try to knock me down, but I’ll stand my ground, With the power of my words, I’ll make the world go 'round, This is more than a dream, it’s my destiny, So put your hands up high if you’re feelin’ me. (Chorus) We rise, we grind, we hustle every day, Through the highs and the lows, we gon’ find our way, In the city lights, our dreams ignite, This is our moment, our time to shine bright. (Outro) So remember my name, 'cause I’m here to stay, With the rhythm and the rhyme, I’m paving the way, For the next generation, I’m settin’ it right, This is our legacy, let's take flight tonight.
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ay friendly critique, rap in bars, you just sound like your speaking with no flow, you need a small pause between each line so it flows better, don't take it personal man, just thought I'd say
Now that's what we're talking about @jadiel.10768531, Nice job on your first track 'I suck '! 1. Letting the beat dictate your flow is a simple way to sound smooth. 🌊 2. Once you find a good recording set up, stick with it! Rapping is all about consistency, try and apply this to every level of your music! 3. Quiet 🤫 - make sure you record in a quiet place and make sure you use those 🎧 for the best results. 4. Rap Fame defo has some powerful effects 🚀 Keep using 'em, but remember less can be more when it comes to the mixing stage! 5. Use denoise on your vocal to reduce the background noise on your track! 6. Try entering one of our weekly contests for the chance at winning the $500 grand prize! 🥇 Keep perfecting your sound, we'd love to hear you progress on your musical journey! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
(Verse 1) Yo, I'm the lyrical architect, buildin' dreams with my bars, From the streets to the stars, yeah, I'm raisin' the par, Got the beat on lock, it's a revolution in sound, Spittin' truth in every line, I’m profound and renowned. Life’s a game of chess, I'm the king on the board, Strategizin’ every move, I ain't gettin' ignored, From the bottom to the top, I've been breakin' the mold, With a mic in my hand, I’m unstoppable gold. (Chorus) We rise, we grind, we hustle every day, Through the highs and the lows, we gon’ find our way, In the city lights, our dreams ignite, This is our moment, our time to shine bright. (Verse 2) Step into my mind, it’s a lyrical maze, Navigatin' through the chaos, in a lyrical blaze, With a vision so clear, I can see through the haze, I’m a poet with the power to amaze and daze. Been through trials and tribulations, but I never gave in, Turned my pain into power, now I’m destined to win, Every scar is a story, every battle a song, Got the heart of a lion, and my spirit is strong. (Chorus) We rise, we grind, we hustle every day, Through the highs and the lows, we gon’ find our way, In the city lights, our dreams ignite, This is our moment, our time to shine bright. (Bridge) Yeah, I’ve seen the dark, but I embraced the light, With the mic in my hand, I’ll continue to fight, For the love of the music, for the thrill of the game, Every verse is a victory, every line is my fame. (Verse 3) From the concrete jungle to the neon skies, I’m a phoenix in the fire, watch me rise and rise, Got the rhythm in my soul, and the beat in my heart, I’m a master of the craft, this is my art. They can try to knock me down, but I’ll stand my ground, With the power of my words, I’ll make the world go 'round, This is more than a dream, it’s my destiny, So put your hands up high if you’re feelin’ me. (Chorus) We rise, we grind, we hustle every day, Through the highs and the lows, we gon’ find our way, In the city lights, our dreams ignite, This is our moment, our time to shine bright. (Outro) So remember my name, 'cause I’m here to stay, With the rhythm and the rhyme, I’m paving the way, For the next generation, I’m settin’ it right, This is our legacy, let's take flight tonight.
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