Avontee Owens

my first rap

Avontee Owens
my first rap

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6 months ago

Beast mode ready, Money on confetti, Hard work sealed me in Rap Fame forever, Climbed from the bottom, Fought 'em in the middle, Rose to the top from the scars Little by little, Tough to reach the followers Started 'em with a nickel, Before I spit the fire It all started with sizzles, Told myself I had to be sick Den a hospital Joined a tournament and won Then my followers double tripled, Battles waitin' on me Accepted and dominated, So many rappers slept on me I was so underrated, You can’t accept a win If you losin' ain’t celebrated, Take a loss and shake it off That will turn into motivation, I don’t beg for nothin' I fight for the crown daily, No matter who in front me I’m holdin the crown lately, I hope to see you soon I’ll be waitin to see your name, Without further a due It’s a pleasure from Rap Fame Welcome.

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6 months ago

Now that's what we're talking about @avonteeowens, Nice job on your first track 'my first rap'! 1. Flows are just as important as bars, practice HOW you wanna spit them bars! 🗣 2. Be yourself! True authenticity can really make people fall in love with your music! ❤️‍🔥 3. Headphones would be great to help improve the quality of your releases. 🎧 4. Try adding some of our built in audio effects which could really help boost this track! 5. Use denoise on your vocal to reduce the background noise on your track! 6. Did you know we have lots more Masterclasses to choose from? There's harder ones too if you're looking for more of a challenge! 💯 Keep perfecting your sound, we'd love to hear you progress on your musical journey! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

6 months ago

Beast mode ready, Money on confetti, Hard work sealed me in Rap Fame forever, Climbed from the bottom, Fought 'em in the middle, Rose to the top from the scars Little by little, Tough to reach the followers Started 'em with a nickel, Before I spit the fire It all started with sizzles, Told myself I had to be sick Den a hospital Joined a tournament and won Then my followers double tripled, Battles waitin' on me Accepted and dominated, So many rappers slept on me I was so underrated, You can’t accept a win If you losin' ain’t celebrated, Take a loss and shake it off That will turn into motivation, I don’t beg for nothin' I fight for the crown daily, No matter who in front me I’m holdin the crown lately, I hope to see you soon I’ll be waitin to see your name, Without further a due It’s a pleasure from Rap Fame Welcome.

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