Alfred jones
Alfred Jones33 Plays
•8 months ago
Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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Now that's what we're talking about @alfredjones.10393184, Nice job on your first track 'Alfred jones '! 1. Try using the rhyme generator to develop even more on your first rap! ✍️ 2. Be yourself! True authenticity can really make people fall in love with your music! ❤️🔥 3. Using headphones will cut out the feedback and really help the quality. 🎧 4. Why don't you try some autotune or reverb to really enhance your track? 5. This was too short to give you any proper feedback, can you drop something a bit longer? 6. Try entering one of our weekly contests for the chance at winning the $500 grand prize! 🥇 Send your next track to hot so we can see how you took our tips on board!💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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