lilmandave
lilmandave

the worst s song I’ve ever made

the worst s song I’ve ever made

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3 months ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.

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3 months ago

Yo @lilmandave! Waddup. Thanks for sharing your song 'the worst s song I’ve ever made'! 💥 Here's some words of advice on the next one: 1. Practise makes perfect, improving on every drop will only take you closer to sounding like a pro. 😎 2. Rap music is about the whole package! 📦 Be sure to show off all the skills that make you great! 3. Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. 🎧 4. There are some nice effects in our mobile studio, like Autotune and Reverb. Why don't you try them? 5. Great but too short! Give us something longer and we can send you some real feedback. 6. Why not upload or record a video to go along with your music, that way you could get featured on the Popular Video section! 📸 We hope to hear some more from you in the future, we would love to hear how you take our advice on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

3 months ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.

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