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•6 months ago
Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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Keep it up, your journey's just started! 🚀 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Dope 🔥
Now that's what we're talking about @jreue3vcut, Nice job on your first track 'm'! 1. Try using the rhyme generator to develop even more on your first rap! ✍️ 2. Try recording when you're feeling yourself! The feel good vibes will come out in your raps! 3. You can clean up the recording quality here by using headphones to minimize feedback! 4. Why don't you try some autotune or reverb to really enhance your track? 5. Unfortunately the track is too short for us to give you proper feedback, please send in a longer track! 6. Why not upload or record a video to go along with your music, that way you could get featured on the Popular Video section! 📸 We hope to hear some more from you in the future, we would love to hear how you take our advice on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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