My mom
Bumble Green18 Plays
•10 months ago
I have a mom, her name is Loreen She's the best mom that I've ever seen With her warm smile and loving heart She's always been there from the very start She's my rock, my guiding light In her arms, everything feels right She cooks the best meals, oh what a treat And her hugs, they can't be beat She's my confidant, my best friend With her, I know I can always depend She's there to listen, to lend a ear And wipe away any trace of fear She's taught me love, kindness, and grace And to always have a smile on my face I am grateful for all that she's done For me, she's truly second to none So here's to my mom, Loreen The most wonderful mom there's ever been I'll love her forever and a day She's my mom, and that's all I'll say.
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