Depression
Patience Joseph Okuwa Kalu11 Plays
•10 months ago
Shooting for the stars I'm an astronaut you say that you're a goat I put you in a curry pot I get it popping like a fist full of dread locks on a clean beat I get funky as a gym sock they don't know I'm ill til they test me I lay so many bars My vocab looks arrested God flow, I can get on a track and bless it side shows, I call my competition They ain't ready I'm cold as the winter soldier Avengers Bucky a bad man but I'm out the cage like a trustee hello Rap Fame, it's your poster child bout to renovate cuz I plan to be here a while so ya better learn my name like the school teacher cuz I'm bout to run the game I'll see you in the bleachers you can't see me like my mode is stealth I'm ahead of my time, dont get ahead of yourself
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life like a sandwich whatever way you flip it the bread comes first
You've got that swagger, own it in every verse! 😎🔥 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
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