Rap Fame A&R

9 months ago

Hey @raivisbobby.10058841 we liked your track 'Dillon the trouble ', We're so happy you're joining the Rap Fame Community, so here's a couple tips from us: 1. Recording quality matters fam! Make sure you don't let your excitement cloud your judgement! Release your tracks when they ready! 🤟 2. Remember to add dope cover art to your tracks to really show off your image and vibes! 🌊 3. Try adding some of our built in audio effects which could really help boost this track! 4. Try using our denoise feature to reduce the background noise from your device! 5. Now you've done your first track, get some feedback from established judges on how to improve through Judge 4 Judge! 💎 Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Raivis Bobby

9 months ago

dillin pulled up body covered in black, He didn’t have a plan But had a gat and a mask, Tryna find a quick way To come up with some cash, Toss the piece in the river And clothes in the trash. He walked into the bank He said hands in the air, Put the money in the bag Or I’m killin you dear, Guard tried playing hero Dillon showing no fear, Took a shot at the guard And watched him slump in the chair. He dipped out the back And hopped in the truck, Jumped on the highway He was doing a buck, Weaving in and out of traffic He was pushin his luck, Till he was tossed from the whip From the tree that he struck. He could hear 12 coming He saw the lights in the distance, Shot at the first cruiser with his 9 But he missed it, Cut through a back yard Like a man on a mission, Thinking if only the guard At the bank would’ve listened. Surrounded by the fuzz He knew he made a mistake, He thought of his wife And her smiling face, He reached for the gun That he had in his waist, Saw a flash and woke up Back in front of the bank.