(Verse 1)
(Verse 1) Feeling the pain, I cry alone in the dark Battling the demons, tearing me apart Silent tears fall, they're drowning my soul 100 BPM, but my heart feels slow Lost in my thoughts, trapped in this maze No one to lean on in these lonely days Bottled up emotions, they're ready to explode But I keep it all inside, no one will ever know (Verse 2) Late nights, heavy heart, it's hard to sleep My mind races, memories cutting deep Searching for solace, seeking a way out But I'm stuck in this cycle, filled with doubt Invisible scars, they're etched upon my skin My smiles are fake, hiding the pain within I cry alone, my tears a silent symphony But I'll keep fighting, finding my own remedy (Verse 3) No shoulder to cry on, no one to hold I navigate the darkness, feeling so cold But through the tears, strength begins to rise I'll conquer this battle, no compromise I cry alone, but I'm not defeated Every tear shed, my pain is depleted 16 bars of truth, this is my release I'll rise from the ashes, find my inner peace
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