Looking up the sky cherishing the stars shining brighter even in the dark floating there was me amidst the stars l was
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Looking up the sky cherishing the stars shining brighter even in the dark floating there was me amidst the stars l was not ready to come down even if all went dark l was ready to be fine waking up was me with a splash l thought i would drown surprisingly everything went round can believe am back back to the mysterious life where i know everyone lies But you gat to know trust none but mind Gat no friends, just my pen and paper to write they said life is hard, but l've gat to try Got my luck with God on my side cause its my time to shine can't help but feel high with this little inspiration, i still feel proud
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