Rap Fame A&R

1 year ago

Hi @bonzaiirawlings! Here's a couple tips for your track 'Somber Melody a Haunting Farewell'! 💥 1. Practice makes perfect and you're on the right track! Keep on working on those details and the success will come. 2. Try recording when you're feeling yourself! The feel good vibes will come out in your raps! 3. Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. 🎧 4. Keep experimenting with vocal effects! Sometimes less can even be more! 😲 Test different effect levels and settings to find the best balance! 5. Try using our denoise feature to reduce the background noise from your device! 6. Post a longer track so we can really give you some detailed thoughts. 7. There's a $1,000 prize pool in our weekly contests 🏆 Think you got what it takes? Try creating a track based on this week's theme! It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame team 😎

Bonzaii rawlings

1 year ago

(Intro ) I ripped open my own chest cause of a pain that won't subside, I crushed my heart with no regrets for a love that slowly died, The thoughts in my head are now haunting and relentless, I wore my heart out with dread and felt trapped in everlasting darkness So now I rap to remind yall of the pain my life was and hope yall will listen to me talk about what I once was (Verse 1) Pump a chest full of lead, the weight of despair, They better off dead, a life beyond repair, Lost in the shadows, drowning in my sorrow, No hope for tomorrow, a heartache hard to swallow. (Chorus) I'm lost in this darkness, consumed by the pain, A broken soul, forever stained, Crushing my own spirit, drowning in regret, In this tragic symphony, I'm the one to forget. (Verse 2) In this desolate world, I'm a hollow shell, No light can penetrate, trapped in this spell, Torn apart by love, left with shattered dreams, Haunted by memories, tearing at the seams. Raging storms within, a tempest of despair, No solace to find, no one left to care, I'm crumbling beneath the weight of my own sorrow, Aching for a better tomorrow, but it's a distant tomorrow. (Bridge) I've reached the darkest depths, my heart's been torn, No more strength to fight, feeling so forlorn, This sadness engulfs, suffocating my soul, No escape from this darkness, my heart takes its toll. (Chorus) I'm lost in this darkness, consumed by the pain, A broken soul, forever stained, Crushing my own spirit, drowning in regret, In this tragic symphony, I'm the one to forget. (Outro) In the depths of despair, I'll fade away, Lost in the echoes of a love's decay, A somber melody lingers, as I bid farewell, To a life once cherished, now a haunting farewell.