Stories unfold
Captain Crackerjack77 Plays
•27 Aug 2023
In Montreal city, where the streets unfold, Lived a young boy with stories untold. Brothers and sister, a family bound, Facing the struggles life threw around. Crackhead mother, lost in the haze, Pimped out by darkness in endless ways. But the boy, resilient, he stood so strong, In the face of adversity, he'd prove them wrong. Montreal's backdrop, a concrete scene, But through it all, the boy had a dream. To rise above, to break the chain, To rewrite his story, to heal the pain. With brothers and sister, a united crew, They faced the storms, they knew what to do. Strength in their bond, love by their side, Together they'd conquer, with hearts open wide. Through rhythm and rhyme, the boy found his voice, Turning his pain into lyrics, his choice. A rap of courage, a rap of might, A beacon of hope in the darkest night. So remember this tale of battles and strife, Of a young boy in Montreal, finding his life. Rising above, with love as his guide, In the city's rhythm, his dreams would collide.
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In Montreal city, where the streets unfold, Lived a young boy with stories untold. Brothers and sister, a family bound, Facing the struggles life threw around. Crackhead mother, lost in the haze, Pimped out by darkness in endless ways. But the boy, resilient, he stood so strong, In the face of adversity, he'd prove them wrong. Montreal's backdrop, a concrete scene, But through it all, the boy had a dream. To rise above, to break the chain, To rewrite his story, to heal the pain. With brothers and sister, a united crew, They faced the storms, they knew what to do. Strength in their bond, love by their side, Together they'd conquer, with hearts open wide. Through rhythm and rhyme, the boy found his voice, Turning his pain into lyrics, his choice. A rap of courage, a rap of might, A beacon of hope in the darkest night. So remember this tale of battles and strife, Of a young boy in Montreal, finding his life. Rising above, with love as his guide, In the city's rhythm, his dreams would collide.
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