Yo yo! Just looking for some solid feedback regarding the flow/delivery and comprehensive understanding pof the song. If I listen to you, and offer you feedback as an writer with almost a decade of experience, I hope that you would give me the same respect haha. LYRICS: Rhymes scripted, fire depicted, on my mind's vast canvas, these lyrics I'm spitting, Life's fast lane, on a rapid decline, battling the clock of time, addictions laying siege to my mind. Watchful of whiskey’s grip, memory's reality, steadily tightening, Mom, a haunting ghost, a lost host, her absence, icy riddles, so frightening. Caught in the liquor's lore, results ignite like shocking lightning, Communicating with the restless, mind meditating, oddly festive, in sorrow's deep abyss, where peace resists, my spirit wrestling, unrelenting. Mirror reflects a spectral stranger, Identity's in danger, reality's twisted, life's spinning, World’s sinning, edge thinning, truth's grinning, behind Devil's liquid, I'm merely hinting, Mirror whispers, sanity hisses, no comfort given, self-doubt, emboldened, a chiding tinting. Adderall fuels the grind, the 9-5 bind, then time unwinds, into darkness, I’m sliding, Riding high as a kite, in dreadful fright, into Trazodone's dream, a tranquil scheme, I scream, Wake up in oblivion's arms, silent, abiding, reality's cruel dream. Split personality, identity's duality, a reality's fatality, Mirror's morality, humanity's finality, echoes of a lost soul's sad rationality. Battling these voices in my head, weightless in gravity, choices bred, lead a madman to calamity, In this split personality, fear is just reality, love's a casualty, mentality rewritten, tragically. A toast to a ghost, a sorrowful boast, a liquid lament, pain’s bitter design, Fool’s gold in a bottle, misery's throttle, adrift on an ocean of brine. Devil unfolding, fear's hand he's holding, laughs at my patrolling, "You've lost control, boy. Thanks for your soul." Call the cops?", my reply lost in a laugh, "To betray my own path? To confess my wrath?" But the voice just laughs, sinister in its aftermath Awake, startled, reality's marbled, a dream that had me baffled. White room, a tomb, memories in a bloom, mental hospital, my mind has crumbled, Doctors murmur schizophrenia, bipolar mania, Medicine hits, ears ring, ushering dreams, reality's cruel fling, A life lived in a dream, a chilling scream, a lost soul's theme, Reality is not as it seems, trapped in this lucid dream's regime.