heartbreaking
Catch a train to my place Call me when you get into town I'm gonna meet you at the station, oh yeah You can tell me why you're feeling down Is it you mother, though she tends to shout a bit But she's got her problems too And I don't doubt it Baby your father I know he's always drinking Most of the time He don't even know what he's doing Now baby Catch a train to my place Call me when you get into town Gonna meet you at the station You can tell me why you're feeling down I can't imagine Why you're feeling so alone It's just a week since I saw Baby why are you crying so? All you got to do is Catch a train to my place Call me when you get into town I'm gonna meet you at the station You can tell me why you're feeling, Catch a train to my place Call me when you get into town I'm gonna meet you at the station You can tell me why you're feeling, Ah baby why you're feeling down Down, down, down, down Why don't you come around Why don't you catch a train The midnight train's all right
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Catch a train to my place Call me when you get into town I'm gonna meet you at the station, oh yeah You can tell me why you're feeling down Is it you mother, though she tends to shout a bit But she's got her problems too And I don't doubt it Baby your father I know he's always drinking Most of the time He don't even know what he's doing Now baby Catch a train to my place Call me when you get into town Gonna meet you at the station You can tell me why you're feeling down I can't imagine Why you're feeling so alone It's just a week since I saw Baby why are you crying so? All you got to do is Catch a train to my place Call me when you get into town I'm gonna meet you at the station You can tell me why you're feeling, Catch a train to my place Call me when you get into town I'm gonna meet you at the station You can tell me why you're feeling, Ah baby why you're feeling down Down, down, down, down Why don't you come around Why don't you catch a train The midnight train's all right
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