D. N. M
D. N. M

Short storyy

Short storyy

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13 May 2023

-SUCSESS. Yeah they used to called me D. n. M couse my dad dinied mew when i was 5 growed up to be ten only to undarstand it when i was 15 suddely i realised that i was still a teen suddelly my teacher just took me in to learn about chemisty but fuck love a houd rather learn about history like my dad who dined mew fuck him what is his story i tryed to solve it when i was 5 but rigth now am doing fine with out him i starting to feel great wait dont change the subject huh i just did right now am learning maths. am methemethican i have solved my ex doing number till i reach 20 but wanted to get rich when am 25 just to teach dad about life wait dont get upside now am trying to give you the ligth you have to earn it to be called sir but i have witnesd the life of being a sirr to see thing clearly nou couse my emotions were heavy mother tried to keep me happy but she left me me when i was 14 it felt so bad cozz he wasent there yes i know i wasent fair i coudint evevn stare at my mother s grave they said i was brave suddely my dream faited away i blaimed my father coz the coward wasent there to witness the pain i felt yes he was scaerd to showup at the moment i started to feel i was the opponet of this whole situation but i focusded on one thing and that was education which is belived it was the creation of success they dont know the stress but i can say sucess born poverty born secuses -Your is ours

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1 year ago

okaaaaaay keeeeep pushing this is real fire

1 year ago

Yo @d.nelmew! Waddup. Thanks for sharing your song 'Short storyy'! 💥 Here's some words of advice on the next one: 1. Don't rush - we know how exciting it can be to record your first track, but try to take your time to get the most out of the studio! 2. Try and test out the distance between you and the mic before recording, this can make a huge difference to the quality! ✨ 3. Headphones would be great to help improve the quality of your releases. 🎧 4. There are some nice effects in our mobile studio, like Autotune and Reverb. Why don't you try them? 5. Use denoise on your vocal to reduce the background noise on your track! 6. Why not upload or record a video to go along with your music, that way you could get featured on the Popular Video section! 📸 Keep uploading tracks for the chance to be added to our editors Playlists! 🔥 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

1 year ago

-SUCSESS. Yeah they used to called me D. n. M couse my dad dinied mew when i was 5 growed up to be ten only to undarstand it when i was 15 suddely i realised that i was still a teen suddelly my teacher just took me in to learn about chemisty but fuck love a houd rather learn about history like my dad who dined mew fuck him what is his story i tryed to solve it when i was 5 but rigth now am doing fine with out him i starting to feel great wait dont change the subject huh i just did right now am learning maths. am methemethican i have solved my ex doing number till i reach 20 but wanted to get rich when am 25 just to teach dad about life wait dont get upside now am trying to give you the ligth you have to earn it to be called sir but i have witnesd the life of being a sirr to see thing clearly nou couse my emotions were heavy mother tried to keep me happy but she left me me when i was 14 it felt so bad cozz he wasent there yes i know i wasent fair i coudint evevn stare at my mother s grave they said i was brave suddely my dream faited away i blaimed my father coz the coward wasent there to witness the pain i felt yes he was scaerd to showup at the moment i started to feel i was the opponet of this whole situation but i focusded on one thing and that was education which is belived it was the creation of success they dont know the stress but i can say sucess born poverty born secuses -Your is ours

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