Ixxy

1 year ago

WAKE EM UP 🗣️🔊 WAKE EM UP 🗣️🔊 WAKE EM UP 🗣️🔊

TheSDOG1

1 year ago

ice.. nice. good deliverey solid ob rhe beat rimm have a lot of back and forth its attractive and the vocals are on point as well as the delivery. The topic and hook could use some work in changing how many times you repeated it. try to give 2 repeats per verse at the beginning and at the end then form back into the next verse. try to also speak with more authority to ensure what u say is what u mean with more emphasis Finally i will rate This one a 7. U can improve and i believe u will. Keep Going and Goodluck! Sincerely yours! TheSDOG1/ RapFame.com

Lord-Plourde

1 year ago

Working very good vibes. Very creative as well. I love your flow in technique. Much love and respect tell me.