FIRST SHOT
YOUNG DAWG15 Plays
•01 Apr 2023
Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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Keep it up g don’t let anyone deter you 🔥🙏 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Wassup @aotyfiesty.8739026, Thank you for sharing 'FIRST SHOT' with our community 💥. Here are a few words to the wise from us: 1. Keep learning from the legends and have one eye on the lyrics to get a feel for that flow! 👀 2. Some eye-catching cover art can draw new people to your music! 🎇 3. You can clean up the recording quality here by using headphones to minimize feedback! 4. If you're lookin' for a bit of extra sizzle, try out some of our vocal FX. 5. Use denoise on your vocal to reduce the background noise on your track! 6. This was too short to give you any proper feedback, can you drop something a bit longer? 7. Try out the Rhyme Helper to develop your bars & step up your first track! Overall this junt eat fam! Can't wait to see what else you drop! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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