love it

11 Plays

30 Mar 2023

Many times I tried, everyday I got her on my mind, stuck here feel dead but some how I'm still alive, many times it feels like I should of lost my life. It feels like I'm stuck here forever but at last it's next to her, I'm feeling hungry for her thirst, yeah she is my curse, blood scars blood marks yes it hurts, with an angel some how we still together this long, got me thinking about how we really do belong, shit it don't always feel right but your still stuck here In my arms and it don't feel wrong.

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2 years ago

Love it! You came through with the lyrics and flow!

yea spit that gee you getting there don't give up can you check out my latest battle

2 years ago

Hi @slyshotgun28! Here's a couple tips for your track 'love it'! 💥 1. Recording quality matters fam! Make sure you don't let your excitement cloud your judgement! Release your tracks when they ready! 🤟 2. Some eye-catching cover art can draw new people to your music! 🎇 3. Using headphones can drastically improve the quality of your track, try using them next time to give your track that extra boost! 🎧 4. Your next track could sound even better with some vocal FX. Why not try our set in the studio? 5. Use denoise on your vocal to reduce the background noise on your track! 6. The track here is way too short, send us a longer track so we can help you improve! 7. Why not upload or record a video to go along with your music, that way you could get featured on the Popular Video section! 📸 Submit more for feedback from us and community to see how you're progressing! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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