I Remember When
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•18 Mar 2023
i remember i remember i remember when you stole from me and i knew that youd do it again and again and again but the jokes on you my dearest friend cause you cant take whats freely given yeah i knew yeah i knew yeah i knew right from the start that you had my you had my you had my heart and my mind and my mind and my mind and body and body and body and soul i knew in that moment that youd kill me real slow tear out my heart it was yours from the start mess with my mind keep me in agony and ecstacy all of the time break my body from head to toe sweetly seduce my shattered soul you showed me that heaven is a real place right here on mother earth deep within the flower that blossoms at birth quivering and trembling and shaking as you say dont be afraid baby please come inside as i gets down on my knees between your legs speaking in tongues as i begin to pray
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keep practicing to be even better, work on your mic upgrade
keep on grinding and perfecting your sound and your delivery 💯🫡 Bars: On point 🎯 Delivery: On point 🎯 Impression: On point 🎯
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