Pretenders (Get real)

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the great pretender untimely defender weekend long benders hope I don't lose my fender racing thru life fast this shit ain't right but I'm doing quite alright just being the fuck up I am cause I know I will be and it's okay if you don't support me time stops for no one indefinitely belittle and underestimate me I don't need anyones fuckin permission I don't give a fuck if you don't listen I'm complaining moaning and bitchin with no specific direction lost in the abyss of darkness here to shed some light too many lurking in shadows scared to take necessary risk 90s kid and I'm the fuckin shit why the fuck is the world so sensitive what the fuck is the motive here's something no need for ad lib fuckin live and let live and stop directing my perspective I'll rather sink in a ship setting my own fuckin sails treading my own fuckin trails only to succeed from my fails and if you know what I just said replay this shit until it resounds In your head

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Drayce

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3 years ago

Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @drayce707, We listened to your track 'Pretenders (Get real)', here's our report! 📝 Track Artwork 🛠 Track Length 🛠 Title ✅ Description ✅ Bars ✅ Cadence/Flow ✅ Delivery ✅ Vibe ✅ Concept ✅ Trending ⭐️ Recording quality ✅ Submit more music for another report from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎 ⭐ - Feature Worthy ✅ - Good Start 🛠 - Needs Improvement

Joe Mayo

3 years ago

🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Kingsley Tochukwu

3 months ago

While the hook is strong, the verse feels a bit off! 🪫 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

J-SAINT Beats

5 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

kirbysdreamland

8 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥