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05 Mar 2023

14 in a bout a year in a half I’ll be a teen. Jesus the savior made me clean. Lady’s be looking at me like I created a seen. I keep a Glock on my spleen. I’ll break your ankles like I’m tryna be mean. I’ll open this door to my sub marine. Treat your girl like a queen. Yea I drink energy drinks that have caffeine. Ayy she said her favorite color is green. And her favorite holiday is Halloween. 14 years ago I wasn’t born but sure had big dreams. Whats wrong mama you look so fine. What’s the theme to this song no idea. Ever day I think it’s time. Like a qb yea I throw dimes. When I this devil in my head it makes me want to scream. If you make fun of me or my god I’ll turn you into a meme. That should be an illegal. Devil says what are does at least they ain’t Nike. Then like we go to space. Grab my key and we good. God could come back any time. Just continue to climb. The spirit is mine. At my concerts yea there big lines. You know the kids at school like to whine. Like the people at church drinking wine. Like back in the day when people did vine.yea Jesus he shines. He’s the one that created the designs for your life. Knife

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1 year ago

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1 year ago

14 in a bout a year in a half I’ll be a teen. Jesus the savior made me clean. Lady’s be looking at me like I created a seen. I keep a Glock on my spleen. I’ll break your ankles like I’m tryna be mean. I’ll open this door to my sub marine. Treat your girl like a queen. Yea I drink energy drinks that have caffeine. Ayy she said her favorite color is green. And her favorite holiday is Halloween. 14 years ago I wasn’t born but sure had big dreams. Whats wrong mama you look so fine. What’s the theme to this song no idea. Ever day I think it’s time. Like a qb yea I throw dimes. When I this devil in my head it makes me want to scream. If you make fun of me or my god I’ll turn you into a meme. That should be an illegal. Devil says what are does at least they ain’t Nike. Then like we go to space. Grab my key and we good. God could come back any time. Just continue to climb. The spirit is mine. At my concerts yea there big lines. You know the kids at school like to whine. Like the people at church drinking wine. Like back in the day when people did vine.yea Jesus he shines. He’s the one that created the designs for your life. Knife

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