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I like it it sound very good I like beat too good job
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great GREAT short rap for a new member, i too am new to rap fame but have been practicing/writing/freestyling nonstop for 3 years so i have a little knowledge to impart. next time try to make your words between your "hook" ("life is hard") longer and rhyme, preferrably with a different method of arranging and delivering the rhyming scheme on each verse. this will add variety and quality to the song. like for example in one verse rap about WHY life is hard maybe. keep it up:)
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