the rap in lap
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•06 Feb 2023
Get out out my way you stank every day I found a body in the ocean and it smells like lotion and cloven frozen bosun promotion and cozen yu yu yu yu yu I went to Augusta and I ate some pasta and saw some lava mamma ah ah ah ah ah that will be it peace
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Bars: Can improve 👏 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Great 🎉
Bars: Nice 🌟 Delivery: On point 🎯 Impression: On point 🎯
Now that's what we're talking about @ur_.boy.tyty, Nice job on your first track 'the rap in lap'! 1. Letting the beat dictate your flow is a simple way to sound smooth. 🌊 2. Try recording when you're feeling yourself! The feel good vibes will come out in your raps! 3. Get your headphones plugged in if you want to see a big increase in the quality of your track. 🎧 4. Rap Fame defo has some powerful effects 🚀 Keep using 'em, but remember less can be more when it comes to the mixing stage! 5. This was too short to give you any proper feedback, can you drop something a bit longer? 6. Why not upload or record a video to go along with your music, that way you could get featured on the Popular Video section! 📸 Send your next track to hot so we can see how you took our tips on board!💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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