Gianni Beltran Moreno
Gianni Beltran Moreno

staring up at the stars

staring up at the stars

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28 Jan 2023

Staring up at the stars Oh can't you see That I am trapped In a maze of memories Wandering right Not a single end in sight I'm feeling ready to fight But no one knows of my plight Standing in the dark Standing in the silence The only sound my footsteps And my own mind's violence Trying to speak But I am far too weak I've reached past my peak And my blood starts to leak I just wanna be me I just wanna flee Just wanna sail the sea From my despair be set free I don't even know myself It's been a while since the start I'm lost and even though I try I'm unable to find my heart

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keep working on your craft you'll be on top

1 year ago

the vocals need to be louder other than that it's great

1 year ago

What's up @giannibeltranmoreno, Thanks for the sharing 'staring up at the stars ', here's our two cents on uploading tracks to Rap Fame! 💥 1. Don't rush - we know how exciting it can be to record your first track, but try to take your time to get the most out of the studio! 2. Sound quality is key when it comes to music! Make sure your track is the best quality you can achieve before posting your tracks! 3. You can clean up the recording quality here by using headphones to minimize feedback! 4. Try mixing up different light studio effects on your vocals to give your track the perfect sound every time. 🎤 5. Now you've done your first track, get some feedback from established judges on how to improve through Judge 4 Judge! 💎 Keep uploading tracks for the chance to be added to our editors Playlists! 🔥 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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